Got comments back from my personal editor on the third short story featuring my new PI. He feels, like I do, that it's my best yet. I sure hope that's the case because we should get better as writers with the more practice we get, right? He even picked out a couple of the stylistic things I did as things he liked. The two problems he found were the opening paragraph (which I new) and he felt the ending was a bit confusing. Here's to another round of revisions.