As I mentioned in the comments the other day, I'm working on a follow up to Tuesday's Friday Flash Fiction story. I'm struggling a little bit with it. The narrative this time around seems to be taking on a bit darker tone, which isn't how I heard the original in my head. Then again...if your lead has been betrayed/shot and his girlfriend kidnapped, anyone would probably want to go Death Wish on their enemies.
Act 2 is a kind of shift from heist story to revenge story, so maybe I should just get out of my own way and let the story tell itself.